The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table describes
,
the percentage used in four different Remove the comma
apply
fuel
and other types to produce electricity in five different Asian countries during the year 2005.
To summarize, in the year 2005 Malaysia and Singapore stood first in Coal & lignite Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
while
most of the countries least witnessed in Hydro
& wind
.
In the year 2005, Malaysia was 61% in Coal & lignite whereas
lowered in Petroleum products
with
2%. Change preposition
by
Likewise
, Nuclear, other and Hydro
& wind
was
19%, 13% and 5% respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Further
, in Singapore Coal & lignite and Hydro
& wind
reaches almost higher
percentage with 42% and 39% orderly and Correct article usage
a higher
rest
of them Correct article usage
the rest
was
insignificant. Change the verb form
were
However
, in Thailand
the electricity generated was maximum in Petroleum Add a comma
,Thailand
products
and other, remaining other products
are negligible. On the contrary
, South Korea and Japan have inclined in Hydro
& wind
and Nuclear with 48% and 49% admittedly. On the flip side, lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
margined
was 3% each in Petroleum Replace the word
margin
products
in South Korea and Japan, also
Japan has one more less value in Hydro
& wind
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