The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the percentages of Australian women and men doing regular exercise in divergent
age
groups in the year 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
in all age
groups, females
stood the first rank except in the ages
15 to 24 as the youngest group. In addition
, the figures for males
and females
who did regular physical activity were almost the same at the ages
65 and over.
The percentage
of women who did regular physical activity was higher than that of men, while
in the youngest age
group (15 to 24), the number of males
who did regular exercise was almost 5% more than that of females
with 47.7%. It is noteworthy that the biggest difference between the figures of females
and males
who exercised regularly was in the ages
35 to 44 with 12%.
By increasing age
, the percentage
of men who did exercise regularly decreased to 39.5% in the ages
35 to 44. After these ages
, the figures for males
increased slightly to 46.7% which was approximately the same as that for females
at the ages
65 and over. In addition
, the percentage
of women rose gradually until the ages
45 to 54 with 53.3% which was the highest percentage
between males
and females
among all age
groups and then
declined at the ages
above 65.Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
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