The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the percentages of Australian women and men doing regular exercise in divergent
age
groups in the year 2010.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
in all Linking Words
age
groups, Use synonyms
females
stood the first rank except in the Use synonyms
ages
15 to 24 as the youngest group. Use synonyms
In addition
, the figures for Linking Words
males
and Use synonyms
females
who did regular physical activity were almost the same at the Use synonyms
ages
65 and over.
The Use synonyms
percentage
of women who did regular physical activity was higher than that of men, Use synonyms
while
in the youngest Linking Words
age
group (15 to 24), the number of Use synonyms
males
who did regular exercise was almost 5% more than that of Use synonyms
females
with 47.7%. It is noteworthy that the biggest difference between the figures of Use synonyms
females
and Use synonyms
males
who exercised regularly was in the Use synonyms
ages
35 to 44 with 12%.
By increasing Use synonyms
age
, the Use synonyms
percentage
of men who did exercise regularly decreased to 39.5% in the Use synonyms
ages
35 to 44. After these Use synonyms
ages
, the figures for Use synonyms
males
increased slightly to 46.7% which was approximately the same as that for Use synonyms
females
at the Use synonyms
ages
65 and over. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
percentage
of women rose gradually until the Use synonyms
ages
45 to 54 with 53.3% which was the highest Use synonyms
percentage
between Use synonyms
males
and Use synonyms
females
among all Use synonyms
age
groups and Use synonyms
then
declined at the Linking Words
ages
above 65.Use synonyms
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