The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The Two maps illustrate the industrial
area
in the Town of Norbiton,
and the planned Remove the comma
apply
future
development of the place.
Overall
, the maps shows
the main features Change the verb form
show
in addition
many
comparisons between now and Change preposition
to many
future
. Notably, the Correct article usage
the future
area
in this
town will be more modern and full of facilities. On the other hand
, the area
in
the north side shows a Change preposition
on
river
, and across the river
there is an Add a comma
,river
area
called Farmland.
The first map indicate
a Norbition industrial Change the verb form
indicates
area
in the present. Therefore
, it shows only factories in the surrounding. It shows three factories in the north, which are close to the river
. However
, there is
two of them in the south, one Correct subject-verb agreement
are
on
the east and two Change preposition
in
on
the western north Change preposition
in
area
.
The second map conduct planned future
development in the industrial area
in the town of Norbition, it shows more facilities like; playground
in the north beside the Add an article
a playground
river
, also
school
in the east, shops in the west and a medical Add an article
a school
the school
center
in the south.
The most significant Change the spelling
centre
changes
between the present site and the planned one for the Fix the agreement mistake
change
future
is all of the factories replaced with houses. Therefore
, the area
will be full of new facilities that will help citizens.Submitted by gamilkhaled3 on
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