You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: - Explain that you have completed your studies - Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code - Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Hi Mom, hi Dad, Yesterday, the final grade for the semester was published on the academy's website, and I finished the program with an average GPA of 3.9 out of 4.3.

Therefore

, I am writing

this

letter to deliver the news that you have been looking for: as of today, I am officially a graduate of Ontario Tech University! Since I was given 3 more tickets to the ceremony, it would be perfect if our family reunites in Canada to celebrate my course completion!

Hence

, I would like to invite all of you to attend the graduation ceremony on June 15 at 9 AM. It will be held at the main hall near the Polonsky Drive - Simcoe Street intersection. Regarding the dress code, please wear formal attire with a blue tie and/or blue dress representing the colour of the university. Since we fly from Vietnam, the International Student Office will sponsor the flight ticket and assist us with the paperwork. I am looking forward to seeing you and Tram Anh soon. Warm wishes, Son Nguyen

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6 paragraphs

176 words

9.00

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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