The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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not only improve
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health.
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life become better especially healthy.When the world has
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epidemic or
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we need medicine.To make
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scentist
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vaccines.Before
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of vaccines many
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died because
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have antibodies to
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against viruses
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science
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many companies
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created vaccines and it was helped
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create immune to against
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viruses
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wear a mask, students go to school every day
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of learning online.
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such
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explain the phenomenon of superstition. For
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at night it will be difficult to breathe.Research shows
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photosynesic
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think have ghost In conclusion,
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makes our life better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • enhancing
  • quality of human life
  • advancements
  • medicine
  • healthcare
  • scientific research
  • solving societal problems
  • improving living standards
  • global issues
  • climate change
  • food scarcity
  • technological advancements
  • limitations
  • negative consequences
  • ethical considerations
  • sustainability
  • environmental preservation
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