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The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram gives
the
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information about the
eco friendly
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 process called reuse plastics. As can be seen in the diagram given the factory will allot many
plastic
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 bottles to the stores and the customers will use them
in
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some
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different purposes.
Then
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, people will have two directions to treat the bottles.
First,
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they can put it in the rubbish and it is moved to the landfill.
Second,
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the
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individuals can recycle them. By collecting the
the
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plastic
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 waste, they will sort
into
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the
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diffenrent
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different
plastic
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 waste
such
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 as recyclable, inorganic or organic.
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people will deliver them to the factory again to carry out the
recycle
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recycling
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 process. At that time, it becomes products again and
continue
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 to serve
for
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the consumers.
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, the second way is better for the environment than the first one and everybody should reuse some
plastic
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 bottles like that for a few good targets.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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