The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the changes made in the coastal village of Seaville from the year 1980 to 2010.
Overall
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, the village experienced a wide range of modifications,
such
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as the relocation of cottages and the abolishment of Tea rooms and sand dunes.
In addition
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, recreational and several infrastructures have been introduced to Seaville within the
last
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12 years. In the year 1980, holiday cottages and mini-hotel were built in sync with the environment
such
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as wetlands and woodland. Eventually, they were reduced and relocated across the East Bank in 2010.
As a result
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of these changes, rows of permanent residential houses were put up over the marsh
as well as
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a retirement village nearby the river.
Moreover
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, Tea rooms served as a recreational area
along with
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the sand dunes for vacation goers, but later ,on were replaced by a restaurant and a high-storey hotel by the end of the period. With all
this
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progress, recreational activity areas were
also
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constructed for the new residents, which includes the golf course, where deforestation was done in the woodlands to make
this
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happen.
Finally
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, around the river boat clubs were established and roads were extended to create a path from cottages to the residential part of the coast.
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