The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six  areas of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of
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utilized for industry, agriculture and domestic purposes in six different regions around the world.
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, the presented data states that most countries in North America and Europe used their
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resources mainly for industries,
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African and Asian nations prioritized agriculture. North American and European nations displayed unique patterns in the way in which the
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was distributed between sectors. Around half (53% Europe, 48% North America) of the available
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in these areas was used in the industrial business, in comparison with 5 % in Central Asia which had the lowest
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usage for
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sector. Both regions,
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, differed from other regions in their low percentage of
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usage in the agricultural sector at 32 % (Europe) and 39 % (North America). The remaining four areas shared
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some important features.
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, when looked closely we could see that Sout East - and Central Asians and Africans, respectively used 81%, 88% and 84% of their
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resources in farming sectors.
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southern Asia only allocated 71 % of the
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to agriculture, but in return managed to become the region with the highest percentage of
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usage in households at 19 %.
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