Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no doubt that smartphones have become an essential and important tool for young people in all areas

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their lives. Some

kids

use

these devices

very

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long

hours

. I think

this

is a bad habit and it can create enormous impacts on their lives. In

this

essay, I will indicate why

this

is a bad development with relevant examples. First and foremost,

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the internet

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could be very dangerous for teenagers. They can enter unsafe pages very easily.

For instance

, they can see adult

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content

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or they can communicate with bad people and it can affect and change their

psycology

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psychology

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horrible

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way

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ways

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. To protect them from these terrible sides of the network, parents should watch their

kids

while

they are using

the

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phones

. In

this

way, they can avoid some negative influences of these

equipments

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.

Secondly

, it can influence their mental and physical health. When they spend a lot of

time

on

phone

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the phone

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instead

of spending

time

with other

kids

or their family members, they can be anti-social in the future.

On the other hand

, when children spend

time

with their friends they are being more active than normal times.

As a result

of these, they will do

less

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physical and social activities when they

use

their

phones

long

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for long

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hours

. Parents can

use

time

setting

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settings

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on

the

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phones

to control the total

hours

of

use

phones

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of phones

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. In conclusion,

it is clear that

there are various reasons for why spending many

hours

on smartphones for

kids

. These problems are not insurmountable. It is parents’ responsibility to tackle these pertinent issues, and they begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above.