You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I would like to thank you for your services given at the
party
organized on 19th of August on Fraidy night . Our colleagues were satisfied and pleased with the party
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Change the punctuation
apply
Actually
the Add a comma
,Actually
party
was about the annual day of the corporation and it was the best party
because of your support.
Moreover
, I appreciate all your staff , they support us and provide us with good services incredibly ,friendly and generous .
All things went well and perfectly as we thought as well except one thing that disappointed us it was cleanliness firstly
,the buffet was varied and delicious all members of the company liked it but the problem was that the glasses and plates were not clean enough
And this
situation has not satisfied us .
I would like to suggest to you clean the stuff before the event and make sure to take action with your staff about this
issue and more control over cleanliness .
Yours faithfully ,Submitted by luhana.chii on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.