Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that
university
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universities
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should only teach subjects like
science
and
technology
. Some people think that
university
should give freedom to
student
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students
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to choose their courses.
This
essay will discuss both views and present my opinion. If
university
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universities
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offer
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offers
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different courses like arts,
humanities
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and humanities
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it will generate lots of
artist
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artists
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.
Whereas
some
student
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students
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will study
science
and
technology
and invent new technologies.
University
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The university
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should give options to
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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to choose their course and provide
wide
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a wide
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range of options to
chose
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from. Not only it will produce
artist
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artists
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,
performers
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and performers
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but
also
provide
platform
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a platform
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for creative people. Students who take
admission
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in
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university
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the university
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are mature enough to understand the employment
oppurnities
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opportunities
they will have after pursuing their chosen course.
For
instance
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in
India
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,India
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various specialised universities are set up by
government
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the government
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of India like agricultural
university
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universities
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,
national
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the national
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school of
drama
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and so on.
However
, if
student
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students
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were provided to study
science
and
technology
there is
risk
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a risk
the risk
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of producing too many unemployable technocrats.
University
teaches only
science
and
technology
will
generates
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thousands of graduates who may not be skilled enough to get hired by large tech companies.
For instance
, in
Australia
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,Australia
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there are specific courses for stem
student
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students
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by some universities but not every
student
gets placed in tech companies. In conclusion, there will imbalance in
economy
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the economy
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too if only
science
and
technology
is
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taught in universities. I am of
opinion
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the opinion
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that
student
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students
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should be allowed to study their chosen subjects.
Science
and
technology
should not be made compulsory.
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