The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
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Firstly
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, the table graph above depicted sources about the amount of the
budget
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of the
police
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in one
area
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of Britain during a period of one year (2017 -2018) followed by two pie charts which provided detailed data about the sectors
this
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money where spent in the same period. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, all the contributions from all sources increased from 2017 to 2018, especially the local taxes
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, we can observe a significant rise in the
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budget
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in 2018 reaching a total of 318,6 million sterling pounds. An increase of around 14 million sterling pounds from 2017 to 2018
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it is clear that
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salaries held the
area
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in which most money was spent in 2017. A total of 75% or just over two-thirds of the
police
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budget
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.
On the contrary
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, the same
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presented a slight decrease reaching over two-thirds, a percentage of 69% of the investment from the
police
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budget
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in 2018. An important jump was held in the
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of technology. The spending grew from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018.
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, the building sector remained similar during the same year period, with 17% of the contribution from the
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budget
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.
To conclude
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, despite the
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budget
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presenting a raise from 2017 to 2018, the investments in the sectors were similar when a comparison is made. The decrease observed in salaries from 2017 to 2018 was equivalent to the increase in technology in 2018, 6%, just under one-third.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, police, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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