Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to let you know about my recent visit to your hotel

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month. The purpose of my stay was the occasion of my birthday; my husband decided to book

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hotel after checking the amazing reviews online on your website. Let me explain the matter

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, we booked 2 bedrooms one for us and the other one for our parents.

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my birthday occasion, the reception staff offered us to book the party hall and pool area for a few hours at no cost, we felt glad after knowing it. But, later that day when we checked with staff again about the booking we made, they mentioned that it got cancelled since someone else paid for it in advance, I was left disheartened after that. I would like to suggest that you should check with your staff about

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matter. Since

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incident spoiled my birthday program and we had to do

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-minute bookings somewhere else. I hope

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doesn't happen to anyone else and you take strict attention to

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situation. Yours faithfully, Gurpreet

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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