You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved -Describe the new apartment -Invite him or her to pay a visit

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Dear Eva, I am glad to share some fascinating things about my new house which is nearby the famous Rose Market. Recently, I have moved to a new apartment. There are a number of things that push me to take a new building.

This

apartment is just about 15 minutes drive from my workplace, by

this

I can save my precious time and use it for exploring my hobbies.

This

is a big advantage for me, even though there are numerous facilities in

this

area

such

as religious places, grocery stores, hospitals and many more. If I talk about my new accommodation, it has a big living room, three bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a huge kitchen where I can spend a plethora of time, especially cooking,and an open balcony at the back of

this

. There is

also

a park on the left side of

this

where children play in the evening. To be honest,

this

is a beautiful area which I like the most. I am happy to invite you to my new house. I have arranged a small party for my close friends and a few relatives.

This

party will be held on next Monday. I will eagerly wait for you. Best Regards, John

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

205 words

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