One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you

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Dear Paul, I did receive your letter mentioning you are coming to see me

this

upcoming Monday and I am extremely excited about it. But unfortunately, I have one situation arrived, my boss fixed an important meeting on the same day that I cannot miss,

as a result

, I won't be able to reach there on time to receive you.

However

, there's nothing to worry about, I have been to YVR airport many times, and there's a guest lounge free of cost which you will find immediately coming out of immigration. I am sure there you can easily pass the time for a few hours as it consists of sofa beds, tv screens and a canteen to enjoy coffee and other refreshments. I will meet you outside after exactly 2 hours at the terminal 2 gates. You can easily recognise me as I will be wearing the red sweater that you once gifted me on my birthday. Looking forward to seeing you soon, have a safe travel. your friend Gurpreet

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

170 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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