More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television sets, microwave ovens and rice cookers. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？

The majority of the masses prefer to purchase a plethora of electronic devices, which could be utilized in houses for many purposes,

therefore

,

this

trend has brought huge variations in society. In

this

, essay I would like to shed light on both pros and cons of

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trend

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along with

my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, innovations in technology have brought a considerable number of advantages

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the lives of dwellers.

Initially

, these devices assisted people to

perserve

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preserve

their

time

, in fact, they are accomplishing their home chores with less effort and quickly.

For instance

, electronic cookers or microwaves are widely used to cook or warm food using electricity in less

time

,

consequently

, women could spend valuable

time

with their family members.

Besides

,

invention

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of television is become a fundamental cause of happiness in the life of individuals as watching movies, soap operas, or other

telecast

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are common modes of entertainment.

On the other hand

, improper utilisation of

such

equipments

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is become

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a matter of concern.

Firstly

,

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passing through meals,

while

cooking or heating procedure, could have a detrimental impact on the health of inhabitants as depicted by scientists.

Secondly

, overutilisation of gadgets is a prime cause of laziness and a lack of physical movements among users, as a repercussion, a considerable number of the masses are suffering from obesity and relevant diseases.

Also

, people are operating mobile phones, laptops or other sources of entertainment for

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day and they have

harmful

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impact on their physical, mental, and social development.

For example

, adults have to wear reading glasses

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childhood since they spent most of their day

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seating in front of televisions,

moreover

, they are getting low grades as well,

due to

improper management of their spare

time

. In conclusion, modifications done

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products have brought ease in the life of dwellers in plenty of ways,

however

, because

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over reliance

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these

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products

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dangerous for their well-being. In my opinion, if gadgets are operated with appropriate care by human beings, these have more benefits so it is a positive development.