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In the last decade, there has been an increase in the number of variety of online courses available to adults. While welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other student see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course.

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Online
courses
 and certifications grew not only for adults but children. With the Pandemic forcing students and adults to stay home
this
 specific industry grew during that period. Where there are people who see these
courses
 are poor substitutes there are others who gained a lot from these
courses
. To start with, these
courses
 helped many students around the world from both developed and under-developed countries to learn new skills or tools. And to improve certain skill sets to grow in a specific domain. Online
courses
 went from being expensive and not so trustworthy to being one of the best tools online to grow and excel. Udemy being an Online platform to provide online
courses
 in India delivered
courses
 to every single child and adult from villages to towns providing free access. On the other ,hand there are adults and students who paid a huge price for the same course before the whole Online
courses
 revolution. It seems fair from their end to be angry at the fact that they had to pay a huge amount
whereas
 now the same course is near to free. In ,conclusion I believe that there are more advantages of online learning than disadvantages. And the online course revolution can be termed one of the best during the pandemic.
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