The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts compare the daily sales average of several items between
summer
and
winter
. The products are hot
coffee
, iced
coffee
, ice cream, soup and salad which are sold at the Brisk Café. We can tell from the diagram that
seasons
have a
strictly
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influence on servings of hot
coffee
and iced
coffee
. Hot
coffee
sales
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around 75
cups
per day in
winter
but only serves
30cups
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30 cups
per day in
summer
.
On the other
hand
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the servings of iced
coffee
are averagely purchased 40
cups
for one day in
summer
but not even reach 10
cups
in
winter
.
Although
the requirement
of
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ice cream in
summer
is higher than in
winter
, the difference is just about 10 servings which is not
that
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as
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huge as hot
coffee
and iced
coffee
. Another product which is affected by
seasons
is soup. The selling in
winter
is better than in
summer
.
On the contrary
, salad is the only item having the same numbers of consumption in both
seasons
. The graph reveals how
seasons
impact
on
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consumers’ choices of food. Unlike iced
coffee
, hot
coffee
, ice cream and soup which
are
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primarily depend on
seasons
, salad has a steady average of daily sales.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words summer, winter, coffee, seasons, cups with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average daily sales
  • Selected food items
  • Seasonal variation
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Comparison
  • Preferences
  • Anomalies
  • Promotions
  • Stock adjustment
  • Seasonal influence
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