The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

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The following pie charts compare five different commonplace source consumptions in the USA from 1980 to 1990. Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that Oil was the main usage in ten years, followed by Natural gas and Coal was showed broadly similar trends in a given period,

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the unrenewable sources with the least numbers were Hydroelectric

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and Nuclear

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. In 1980, Oil accounted for slightly under half at 42%, which was the biggest number in the data, and

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figure decreased by 9% in the

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year. Natural gas was at 26, less doubled than the first one, and it declined by 1% in the final year surveyed.

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, Coal, which was the third in the graph, comprised almost a quarter of the chart in 1980, went up by 5% in 1990.

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, in terms of Hydroelectric

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and Nuclear

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, both were similar percentages which are 5% in the first year,

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, Nuclear

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's number rose from 5 to 10% in 1990.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Energy consumption
Non-renewable resources
Renewable resources
Fossil fuels
Petroleum
Natural gas
Coal
Nuclear power
Hydroelectricity
Percentage change
Megawatts (MW)
Gigawatts (GW)
Sustainable
Environmental impact
Energy policy
Industrial
Domestic usage
Energy shift
Energy mix
Decade comparison

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