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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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We can see that some
people
 like to be self-employed,
instead
 of working with others for a company or organisation at present. There are some
reasons
 for
this
 situation and
also
 it is not an advantage anymore. In
this
 essay, I discuss these things.
However
, self-employers have their own
reasons
 for
this
 current situation. Most of them are personal
reasons
. Some
people
 do not like to take
responsibilities
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,
while
 others do not interest in working
in
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 a time period under rules. As an example, workers say that working 8 morning to 5 evening per five or six days under the companies' rules makes them pressure and
stress
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.
On the other hand
, a number of
people
 are agreed with that they can put more effort into their
work
 when they
work
 individually.
This
 may happen as some personal behavioural and personality problems.
Moreover
, another reason for
this
 situation is several individuals do not like to bow their heads
for
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 others' commands. These are some
reasons
 for
this
.
Although
this
 has so many disadvantages. When they
work
 individually, they might have some social problems in working with
people
 in society.
Nevertheless
, self-employers must take their downwards only with them and it can be harmful for their career and personal life. Companies are the main part of the economy ,not the individual businesses. When companies are down because of a lack of employees that could be
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 effort for the government. Nowadays, because of some reason employees like to
work
 alone rather than
work
 in a company.
This
 occurs some problems for both their lives and society. So working as a self-employed is not a good idea on every side.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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