Writing Task 1 The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph illustrates the percentage of utilized time for working by Australian male and female employees during a
week
in 2007.
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Overall
, the reports show that Australian Linking Words
men
spent more Use synonyms
hours
occupying a Use synonyms
week
rather than Use synonyms
women
. Both genders spent their most between 30-50 Use synonyms
hours
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week
in their working fields, Use synonyms
whereas
equally consumed time over 80 Linking Words
hours
for gaining money.
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To begin
with, in the year 2007, less than a fifth of Linking Words
women
had a job with 0-10 working Use synonyms
hours
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while
a minimal percentage of Linking Words
men
had the same job conditions. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in the 10-20 Linking Words
hours
, with over a fifth of females and approximately 12% of males.
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However
, the situation changed Linking Words
in contrast
, when these two Australian genders had 30-50 Linking Words
hours
of work. In Use synonyms
this
group, over two-fifths of Linking Words
men
were working in a Use synonyms
week
, almost 8% more than Use synonyms
women
with 35%. Use synonyms
Although
the male population was again greater than Linking Words
women
in working conditions with 60-80 Use synonyms
hours
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week
, the total percentage had dropped significantly for both of them. Use synonyms
Men
's working duration was 30% Use synonyms
while
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women
spent about 18% in Use synonyms
this
situation. Linking Words
Moreover
, one in ten males and females in Australia had spent over 80 Linking Words
hours
in their jobs in a Use synonyms
week
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words week, men, hours, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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