Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by huans. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
As a result
of innovation and advancements in technology, machines
are widely used in a variety of jobs
which are previously done by human labour
. There are a number of advantages of this
pattern, however
, drawbacks are also
worth considering. Both sides will be discussed in this
essay.
The main advantage of this
trend is that companies and manufacturing organizations can utilize modern technology and integrate this
innovation into their production process. As a consequence
, the producing goods and services became more effective and efficient, so less time and less effort are needed for
produce the same quantity of finished product and the quality of the final output could be much more than previously made. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, the cost efficiency of the companies could increase as
using more Change preposition
by
machines
in their manufacturing and production cycle. Additionally
, it is clear that
the population of the world rise day-by-day and the demand for everything climb associated with the growth pattern of the world population. So, in order to meet the high demand level, the entities have to apply new practices and innovations to their operations and machines
are the main part of this
system. For instance
, The statistics and data of the US agency show that the cost of the producing same quantity and quality of consumer goods decreases by 30% as a result
of replacing intensive human labour
with the existing machines
.
This
trend has some disadvantages as well. When all the companies started to employ vast amounts of machines
for their operations, human labour
commenced to lose its importance and more people left their jobs
and gained unemployed status. The wealthy class of societies earned a huge amount of profit as a result
of the cost efficiency of their processing cycle. However
, the worker
groups of societies suffered from unemployment and poverty Replace the word
working
consequently
. The research conducted by UN Labour
Committee clearly indicates that,
in the Remove the comma
apply
last
20 years the number one contributor to unemployment and poverty is the people who lost their jobs
after machines
take over their jobs
.
To conclude
, for the sake of the human population modern machines
have certain benefits, whereas
the negative aspects of the situation are that human labour
lose
its importance and the life standards of Change the verb form
loses
lower
class Correct article usage
the lower
reduced
every year.Add a missing verb
are reduced
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