The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the steps
how
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of how
bricks
are produced for building
industry.
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the building
Overall
, the process consists seven
steps digging, rolling, moulding,drying, cooling, packaging and delivering. Beginning with digging the clay and ending up with Change preposition
of seven
delivery
the final Replace the word
delivering
bricks
to the market.
The first step is
to digging
the clay Change the form of the verb
dig
by
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with
digger
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a digger
then
, clay
is Correct article usage
the clay
to
filtered and processed in Change preposition
apply
roller
machine and Correct article usage
a roller
next
step is to Correct article usage
the next
mixed
with sand and water Change the verb
mix
then
, give shape to the bricks
by cutting it
with Correct pronoun usage
them
wire
cutter or Add an article
a wire
by
kept in a mould after that Correct your spelling
be
trasnfered
the raw shape Correct your spelling
transferred
bricks
to oven
for drying for 24 to 48 hrs.
Once Add an article
the oven
drying
process is done the. Put the dried Add an article
the drying
bricks
into the kiln in
both moderate and high temperature up to 1300 degrees Celsius Change preposition
at
then
placed the bricks
in to
cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hrs.Join the words
into
now
Capitalize word
Now
finally
bricks
is prepared for packaging and ready to deliver in
the market.Change preposition
to
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks with synonyms.
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