Many countries invest money to prepare competitors to join top competitions, like the Olympic or the Olympics or the World Cup. Therefore, it is necessary to offer money to encourage children to exercise more? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Even tho, nations tend to spend a lot of money to encourage athletes to participate in international competitions,

such

as the Olympic or Olympics or the World Cup, I strongly disagree with the statement, that suggests paying

children

in order to make them do more exercise. First of all, If you want

children

to be healthier, paying them, certainly, won't lead to any results in the long term. Since, at

first,

parents will push their

children

to be more active, for the sake of gaining money, but

then

, because

this

is something imposed on the

children

, the child is going to feel tired and unhappy about doing

this

.

Thus

, it is not fun for them to move and exercise in

this

way, which is why

this

is going to

last

only for the short term.

Furthermore

, I think that the solution to solve

this

problem is incorrect

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because you have to consider that we are talking about a child,

therefore

they just want to have fun and enjoy whatever they are doing.

For

this

reason, if you pay them, as stated in the previous paragraph, you are going to have the opposite result.

Consequently

, the best solution, to make

children

more active, is to let them play with their friends or try new sports, about which they are passionate. Take,

for example

, a child that has to choose between doing exercises, and

as a result

, they would gain money, and playing with friends, without gaining anything but

hence

having fun. Of course, they are going to choose the second option. In conclusion, I do not think that paying

children

is going to make them more active.

This

type of solution was adopted for real competitors, but implementing

this

procedure with

children

wouldn't have any positive effect, because they are only moved by the enjoyment that the game played will bring.