Many countries invest money to prepare competitors to join top competitions, like the Olympic or the Olympics or the World Cup. Therefore, it is necessary to offer money to encourage children to exercise more? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Even tho, nations tend to spend a lot of money to encourage athletes to participate in international competitions,

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as the Olympic or Olympics or the World Cup, I strongly disagree with the statement, that suggests paying

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in order to make them do more exercise. First of all, If you want

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to be healthier, paying them, certainly, won't lead to any results in the long term. Since, at

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parents will push their

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to be more active, for the sake of gaining money, but

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, because

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is something imposed on the

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, the child is going to feel tired and unhappy about doing

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.

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, it is not fun for them to move and exercise in

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way, which is why

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is going to

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only for the short term.

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, I think that the solution to solve

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problem is incorrect

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because you have to consider that we are talking about a child,

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they just want to have fun and enjoy whatever they are doing.

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reason, if you pay them, as stated in the previous paragraph, you are going to have the opposite result.

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, the best solution, to make

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more active, is to let them play with their friends or try new sports, about which they are passionate. Take,

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, a child that has to choose between doing exercises, and

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, they would gain money, and playing with friends, without gaining anything but

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having fun. Of course, they are going to choose the second option. In conclusion, I do not think that paying

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is going to make them more active.

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type of solution was adopted for real competitors, but implementing

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procedure with

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wouldn't have any positive effect, because they are only moved by the enjoyment that the game played will bring.