The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summa se the info ation selecting and repo ing the main features, and make compa ons e relevant.

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of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales in the period

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1918 to 2011.

Overall

, it can be seen that the number of households in owned accommodation

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increased in the duration of 1918 to 2001

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dropped in 2011.

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decreased from 1918 to 2001 and it raised in 2011. In 1918, the number of

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owning increased from 22% to 32% and stayed

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the same

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in 1953;

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reached

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peak and represented 68%. Ten years later, it dropped to 64% in 2011.

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rented was on its top which represented 78% in 1918 and it decreased to 68% and stayed in the same amount until 1953.

Therefore

, it dropped 10% each year. In 2001, it represented 30%

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it increased to over 35% in 2011.