The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information on how people bought their hot drinks in five leading States of Australia (
Brisbane
, Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide and Use synonyms
Hobart
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last
4 weeks. Linking Words
Overall
, it shows that all States were least likely to buy fresh Linking Words
coffee
during the timeframe.
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, looking at the chart, all cities had low numbers for buying fresh Linking Words
coffee
, with Melbourne and Use synonyms
Hobart
having the highest value at around 63% and Use synonyms
Brisbane
with the lowest value at around 35%. Meanwhile, the other three cities range from approximately 45% to 50%.
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this
, all locations chose to buy hot drinks at the cafe over instant Linking Words
coffee
, except Use synonyms
Brisbane
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Hobart
, at 50%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, only around 42% of Sydneysiders, which had the lowest rating, bought instant Linking Words
coffee
over the Use synonyms
last
four weeks. Linking Words
Similarly
, only around 49% of Melbournian liked it.
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Lastly
, based on the chart, buying hot drinks Linking Words
such
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coffee
and tea, was very popular in all locations except Adelaide. At least 60% of Use synonyms
Hobart
and Melbourne's people went and had their hot beverages outside. Use synonyms
This
number is followed by Sydney at 60% and Linking Words
Brisbane
at approximately 53%. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, only just below 40% of Adelaide preferred it.Linking Words
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