you are going on a month trauning programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

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Dear sir, I am writing to let you know that I am interested to take part in organising the training programme taking place in the UK

this

month. Let me explain it to you in more detail, I have been your student since the beginning of the year and never took a day off, more importantly,it has been my dream to work with

this

team in order to prepare the venue and give out invitations for my

further

experience.

For instance

, I need to collect some information from you to know more about the event.

Firstly

, I will need the accurate address

along with

any transport service being provided on that day,

moreover

, I wonder if the accommodation is going to be free or if we have to arrange it on our own.

Lastly

, I wish to give out some more details about my experience so I don't miss the opportunity. The previous year I worked with the 'The Royal Games' club to organise the gaming event and I even anchored the show, apart from it, I have

also

volunteered in many social events. Looking forward to a positive reply. Yours faithfully, Gurpreet

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