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The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories

The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories
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The graphs illustrate the comparison of
water
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 usage in three categories (industrial, agricultural or domestic use) in six leading countries.
Overall
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, it shows that agriculture and industrial uses are the most needed categories of all countries. Looking at the chart, it can be seen that 4 out of 6 nations
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 as South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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, used their
water
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 for agriculture. Among these places, Central
Asia
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 had the most
water
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 usage at 88%, which is followed by Africa at 84%. Not far from behind, 81% of SouthEast Asian
water
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also
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 sector. In a similar fashion, following that, all of them, except South East
Asia
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, needed the resources for domestic use, with South
America
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 having the highest number (19%)
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 Central
Asia
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 was the lowest (7%).
In contrast
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, two nations
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 as North
America
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 and Europe mostly supplied their
water
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 for the industry sector.
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 more than half of European
water
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 is used for
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 sector,
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, just under half of North American
water
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 is used the same way.
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, these places
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 had a similar trend with the remaining usage of the resources. Both of them had their second demand for agriculture, with North
America
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 at 39% and Europe at 32%. Their demands for domestic use were
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 similar, at 13% and 15%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, such, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia with synonyms.
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