The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in school and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?
The education process is unquestionably one of the most prevalent and worrying aspects in any society, and its management should be taken seriously. Of course, it is crucial to find an appropriate approach to underachieving students.
However
, I reckon that forcing them to attend some events would be unfair and useless.
On the one hand, there are some benefits of involving this
group of pupils in school life in order to help them to improve their grades. It is known that compulsory activities such
as science competitions are used to be
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On the other hand
, I agree that young people would not be satisfied with this
education system, so they would make a lot of complaints in order to skip it. To begin
with, children are more likely to be exhausted after a school day full of difficult subjects, rules and grammar, therefore
it is almost impossible to teach them without having a break. For example
, there are hundreds of scientific research which have already shown the importance of having a few pauses during the studying process. Moreover
, pupils would not appreciate attending some events, which they do not really like. Indeed, most schools do not give an opportunity to choose a type of additional subject, therefore
students should attend classes which are boring for them. As a consequence
, they would not have the desire to study due to
the fact that they were demotivated.
To conclude
, I believe that the disadvantages of having compulsory completely outweigh the relative advantages, therefore
this
option is not suitable for every student. Furthermore
, nowadays there are a few better methods, which would definitely have a great impact on the individual's achievement.Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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