The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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The two maps compare the changes in Norbiton industrial area now and the planned future development.

Overall

it is clear that

there are plenty of modifications in the Norbiton industrial area. A big roundabout is located in the centre of both maps, and many factories are around

this

roundabout some of them will be replaced with shops and a medical centre.

In addition

, in the west of both maps, the town remains in its location. In the layout, a river is situated in the north, and above it there is farmland

that is

expected to convert to a housing area, and

also

the river is divided into two same-length parts. It is noteworthy that an additional roundabout is located in the south of the scheme

that is

connected to the big roundabout with a road. A school will be built in the east of the scheme, and almost in the middle of the road

that is

connected to the school and big roundabout, there will be a playground. Needless to say that the big roundabout is surrounded by shops, a medical centre, and some factories in the scheme.

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The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

All large companies should provide sports and social facilities to the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you yhink the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, celebrities can now earn more than senior politicians. what might be the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?