Task 1: The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and

 consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart displays how many countries produced and consumed
electricity
Use synonyms
in the year 2014.
Overall
Linking Words
, China and the United States were the biggest contributors to the consumption and production of
electricity
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
the Korea republic was the least contributor to it. In 2014, China and the United States were known to be the massive contributors to the production of
electricity
Use synonyms
which were more than 4,000
billion
Use synonyms
kWh
Use synonyms
. Apart from that, Russia was the only country other than these two nations that produced above 1,000
billion
Use synonyms
kWh
Use synonyms
.
Whereas
Linking Words
, the rest of the countries accumulated somewhere between 940 to 480
billion
Use synonyms
kWh
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, Germany stands out from other nations because it was the only country to produce less than what they consumed in that year.
Although
Linking Words
, for consumption as well China, the United States and Russia consumed the highest and were between 1,000 to 5,400
kWh
Use synonyms
of
electricity
Use synonyms
. Significantly, Japan, India and Germany were the three nations which consumed over 500 plus of
electricity
Use synonyms
and the remaining four countries were below 500
billion
Use synonyms
kWh
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by Melroy  on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual aspect
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • industrial base
  • population size
  • significant difference
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • electrical energy
  • ranking
  • economic patterns
  • industrial patterns
  • technological advancements
  • disparity
  • industrial development
  • economic capabilities
  • anomalies
  • export
  • import
  • energy efficiency
  • waste
What to do next:
Look at other essays: