The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
Out of the two charts given below the first one shows the record of
marriages
and divorces
in the USA and the second graph shows the percentage
of 4 categories related to the marital status of people in the USA. The data is recorded for 30 years
between 1970 to 2000.
The first show indicates that both divorces
and marriages
decreased from 1980 onwards and similarly
the second chart shows a decreasing trend in marriages
and widowed individuals, while
never married people and divorced people slightly increased during these 30 years
.
If we look at the first graph, it displays that number of marriages
was at its peak between 1970 and 1980 at the value of 2.5 million
but after that, it started decreasing and it declined to only 2 million
in the year 2000. Regarding divorces
, the given information shows that the divorce rate was 1 million
in the year 1970 and then
it jumped to all time high
value of about 1.5 Add a hyphen
time-high
million
but after that, it started declining and came back to 1 million
in the year 2000.
In the second graph, the most prominent data is the percentage
of married adults which decreased in 30 years
at the rate of almost 10% while
the percentage
of never married and adults showed an increase in the percentage
of about 0.5 and 0.7 respectively.
Overall
, the 30 years
data
Change preposition
of data
of
US citizens showed that Change preposition
on
marriages
and divorces
decreased.Submitted by msohaibkhan97 on
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