The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart demonstrates the average changes of the population who were born in
Australia
and abroad in different areas, urban, and rural between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, the highest birth
average total outside and inside Australia
in 1995 was in rural areas. however
, the number of birth
in rural declined in 2010 to people who are abroad or inside Australia
.
In 1995 the total of borns new in cities inside Australia
and outside Australia
was 55% and 60% respectively. Although
the number of people who were born abroad in town was 50% the number of people Australian, (from 20 % to 10%), the proportion sum of birth
in cities outside Australia
was higher around 25%.
In 2010 the total of new babies who were born in rural and town region were nearly 15% but it made a difference to be around 5% less in the rural area than in towns.Clearly, both years 1995 and 2010 scored almost 20% higher in the birth
of cities outside than insideSubmitted by solimanfarag777 on
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