You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter:  give details of the celebration  explain the reason why you need time off  suggest a way to have your work done during that time

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is William and I am a senior staff on

Finance

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the Finance

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Department. I am writing

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letter to request some

days

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off because having a family celebration next week. Allow me to explain the details.

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with, the event will be celebrated for three

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from 28 to 30 August 2023 in another country.

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, I must come

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there because it is my older brother's wedding.

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, that day is not a public holiday.

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, I need to

make

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get

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permission

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for taking

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to take

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some

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off to attend

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event.

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this

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permission

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I take

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it is one of the utmost important events in my family,

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apply

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still

had

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have

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days

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of paid leave from the company every year.

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, the urgent task from clients will be completed today. I kindly ask your

permission

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for

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issue. I am looking forward to your

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approval, for the task during my day off, I am already discussed with my team to handle the work and still give me a report every day. Yours Faithfully, William

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Consider structuring your letter with proper salutation and closing for a more formal tone. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and provide a clear connection to the overall purpose of the letter. Consider using a more diverse range of vocabulary and sentence structures to enhance the quality of writing. Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and strive for a more formal tone to align with business communication standards.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Request for leave
Family milestone
Ceremonial occasion
Advance notice
Dedicated employee
Delegation of duties
Seamless transition
Workload management
Collegial support
Gratitude for understanding
Continuity of operations
Resuming duties

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