Some people think cities are the best place to live. Other prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is debated that it is perfect to live in cities,

whereas

other people are passionate about living in the

countryside

.

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essay discusses both views and suggests that it is worth living in the

countryside

because of its scenery and fresh food. There are more significant advantages of living in cities,

for

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you can access

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a better education as many big schools locate here.

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there are other amenities

such

as cinemas, hospitals and you can find it easier to find a job in big industry zones. But from my individual, big cities have bad-quality air, lots of noise and houses or flats are often quite small.

By contrast

, the

countryside

is peaceful and

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more open space with

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fresh air. Because of small populations, there are more opportunities to build bigger

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and it will

comfortable

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to stay after a long work. You can

also

do exercises more naturally and frequently,

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initial sceneries during your square time. Another benefit is fresh food

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grown or collected directly from farms, so you can get more bargains but you still have

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good health. Take two things into comparison, living in the

countryside

makes you

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more chance to keep fit, both

physical

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and

mental

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health. It is obvious that living in the

countryside

are less expensive because you do not have to spend money on extra haulage fee for food. And I believe that the fresh-air space in the

countryside

can encourage kids to play

outdoor

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with their friends and keep them away from modern devices, which most parents are worried about. It is hard to find a suitable place to live as you have to consider carefully all aspects, but I still prefer to live in the

countryside

due to

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benefits.