The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates in comparison how many tourists visit a Caribbean
Island
from 2012 until 2017.
Overall
, the data especially depicts
visitors
who stay on the
island
,
visitors
who stay on
cruise
ships
, and a total of both categories.
Overall
,
although
the three lines show some fluctuations,
however
, it does reach the peak for every category.
Firstly
, it can be clearly seen from 2010 until 2011,
although
both data showed an increase in the total number.
Thus
, in the visitor that stayed on the
cruise
ships
, data rose by about half compared to those who stayed on the
island
.
Furthermore
, from 2012 to 2015
while
visitors
who stayed on the
cruise
ships
outnumbered those who stayed on the
island
by approximately 1.2%.
According to
the graph, around the year 2016, the three charts increased by an almost significant number,
whereas
, total
visitors
who stayed on islands or
cruise
ships
went up above 3% compared to each staying visitor whether on the
island
or the
cruise
ship.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, cruise, ships with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 7 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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