The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the change in three metals
prices
namely
copper
,
nickel
, and zinc during the months in 2014.
Overall
,
whereas
there was an increase in the price of zinc,
copper
, and
nickel
tended to decrease over the
period
. At the beginning of the
period
, zinc
prices
rose to 1% compared to the former month,
then
declined slightly to -1% in June after increasing to 3% in February.
This
number climbed moderately to just under 0% in July before there was stability in the next 2 months. After that,
this
figure reached a peak at around 2%
at the end
of the
period
. From 2% in January, the
copper
prices
have fluctuated and declined to 1% in July. Meanwhile, there was a much more dramatic drop in the
prices
of
nickel
, from the highest percentage in the
period
of 6% in January to -3% in July, making the
nickel
prices
have the lowest percentage change. Experiencing the same tendency from July to September,
copper
and
nickel
prices
also
remained stable and declined to approximately 2% and 1% in December respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, nickel, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.

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  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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