The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of the change in three metals
prices
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namely
copper
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,
nickel
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, and zinc during the months in 2014.
Overall
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,
whereas
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there was an increase in the price of zinc,
copper
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, and
nickel
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tended to decrease over the
period
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, zinc
prices
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rose to 1% compared to the former month,
then
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declined slightly to -1% in June after increasing to 3% in February.
This
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number climbed moderately to just under 0% in July before there was stability in the next 2 months. After that,
this
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figure reached a peak at around 2%
at the end
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of the
period
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. From 2% in January, the
copper
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prices
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have fluctuated and declined to 1% in July. Meanwhile, there was a much more dramatic drop in the
prices
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of
nickel
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, from the highest percentage in the
period
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of 6% in January to -3% in July, making the
nickel
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prices
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have the lowest percentage change. Experiencing the same tendency from July to September,
copper
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and
nickel
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prices
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also
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remained stable and declined to approximately 2% and 1% in December respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, nickel, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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