The increase in the number of privately - owned cars is having a negative impact on both our towns and the environment. What can individuals and government do to reduce this problem?

With society getting more prosperous, more and more citizens tend to choose self-driving

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and low-carbon emission transportation, which results in some societal issues. In

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discuss what are

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problems and resolutions that

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should adopt.

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quality might get worse if unlimited private-owned automobiles are driven down the street. Since most self-owned ars are gasoline-utilized which generates carbon emissions.

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, carbon might affect

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quality reversely.

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,

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pollution becomes a considerable issue.

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, too many vehicles might lead to heavy street

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and noisy honks. With expected numbers of cars popping into towns,

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become inevitable.

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, traffic always

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by honks, which can be considered voice pollution that affects the living experience of local neighbours. Meanwhile, the congestion usually wastes the time of passengers

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and even causes road rage that leads to a worse situation. To solve these problems, there are some proposals for

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.

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,

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could introduce emission regulations or emission tests to limit emissions to protect

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quality.

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, to avoid

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,

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to expand avenues to increase the quantities of cars holding or limit the number of cars down the streets.

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but not least, drivers who honk ruthlessly should be fined for the purpose

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voice noise. In conclusion, a rise in the sales of

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four-wheelers is creating problems in cities and has a negative impact on the environment.

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the support of the government and the people together will result in overcoming

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issue.