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The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line diagram illustrates the garbage recycling rates in the United
states
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 from 1960 to 2011. At a fleeting glance , the total waste
recovery
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 in 1960 was 5.6
million
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tons
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 which remained
alomst
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almost
constatnt
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constant
content
 by 1970. It showed a gradual growth in 1975 which was 9.3
million
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tons
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.There was a minimal change in the quantity of trash collected between 1980 and 1985.After that , the
rate
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 exponentially increased and reached
upto
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up to
 55.8
million
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tons
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 by 1995. The waste
recovery
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rate
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 follows the upward trend from 2000 and ultimately reaches its peak in 2011 when it was 87
million
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tons
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.
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, the trash recycling
rate
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 follows the same trend as waste
recovery
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 which was low at 6.4% in 1960. The percentage of
left over
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leftover
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 products recycling
havent
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haven't
 changed much between 1960 to 1975. After
that
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 there is a slight rise till 1985 when it was 10.1%. Following 1990,the scrap
recovery
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rate
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 shows an upward trend from 16% to 31.4% by 2005. The debris
recovery
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rate
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 was at its peak in 2011 at almost 35%.
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, a linear exponential relationship was observed between garbage
recovery
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 and
its
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apply
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recycling in the united states from 1960 to 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words recovery, million, tons, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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