The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data provided in the form of a line graph compares the pattern of consumption of
pizza
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, fish and chips and
hamburgers
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among Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
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,
while
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the popularity of fish and chips saw a significant decrease over the surveyed period, that of
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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experienced substantial growth. In 1975, the youth generation in Australia had
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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nearly 10 times per year. Over the next 20
years
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there was an upward trend in the number of times that Australian teenagers ate
pizza
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and
hamburgers
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by 80 and 100, respectively. In subsequent years from 1995 onwards,
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figure remained unchanged.
In contrast
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, taking
pizza
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fell by 15 in 1980 among young people in Australia, after which it climbed by 10 till 1985.
This
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value plummets from approximately 95 to just under 40 times per year.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hamburgers with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • trends
  • consumption
  • type of fast food
  • popularity
  • peaked
  • hit a low
  • timeline
  • notable
  • switch
  • cultural trends
  • economic factors
  • marketing efforts
  • increase
  • decrease
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