The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of pineapple exports in metric tonnes conducted by 3 major producing nations in the
last
decade, including the distribution of the price to the buyer of each item in 2019.
Overal
, the trend experienced Correct your spelling
Overall
upward
trend in Add an article
an upward
country
A and C, But Fix the agreement mistake
countries
declining
significantly in Wrong verb form
declined
country
B. In addition
, most of the costs are used in Distribution and retail, profit and taxes, while
the 4 other
are in minor categories.
In 2009, the trend from those 3 countries display frequent fluctuation with Correct pronoun usage
others
country
B is
the most-player producent, reaching Wrong verb form
being
from
around 4.2 million Change preposition
apply
while
country
A and C just approximately 4.5 Fix the agreement mistake
countries
millions
and 0.3 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively. Change to singular
million
However
, in 2019, country
A indicates sharp
increase, reaching over 10 Correct article usage
a sharp
millions
Change to singular
million
while
country
B and C Fix the agreement mistake
countries
is
under 2 Change the verb form
are
millions
.
Change to singular
million
In Addition
, 3 major price to the customer is distribution and retail, taxes and producer, achieving above 15%, while
4 other is just under 15%.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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