The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of pineapple exports in metric tonnes conducted by 3 major producing nations in the
last
decade, including the distribution of the price to the buyer of each item in 2019.
Overal
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, the trend experienced
upward
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an upward
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trend in
country
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countries
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A and C, But
declining
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declined
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significantly in
country
B.
In addition
, most of the costs are used in Distribution and retail, profit and taxes,
while
the 4
other
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are in minor categories. In 2009, the trend from those 3 countries display frequent fluctuation with
country
B
is
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the most-player producent, reaching
from
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around 4.2 million
while
country
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countries
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A and C just approximately 4.5
millions
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and 0.3
millions
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million
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respectively.
However
, in 2019,
country
A indicates
sharp
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increase, reaching over 10
millions
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million
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while
country
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countries
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B and C
is
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are
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under 2
millions
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million
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.
In Addition
, 3 major price to the customer is distribution and retail, taxes and producer, achieving above 15%,
while
4 other is just under 15%.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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