The line chart shows the birth rate in the USA and China from 1920 to 2000

The line chart shows the birth rate in the USA and China from 1920 to 2000
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The line graph presents information about the increase in population in China and the
USA
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due to
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new births, over the period of 80
years
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, from 1920 to 2000. As an
overall
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assessment, it can be clearly seen that the birth rate in both countries fluctuated massively between 1930 and 1955.
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, throughout the period the
number
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observed was higher in the
USA
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.
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,
this
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trend was not followed in 1935 and in the
years
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between 1945 and 1955. In 1920, the
number
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stood at 10
million
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and just over 10
million
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in China and
USA
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, respectively. For the
USA
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this
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number
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kept on fluctuating between 1925 and 1940, before it plunged down to reach 5
million
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in 1945, the lowest of all time. Between 1945 and 1950, the count experienced the largest increase, soaring dramatically to its peak of 15
million
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. After reaching its culmination it decreased steadily in the remainder period, with some variations in between. In China, the birth rate witnessed its first jump in 1935, after which it declined steeply till 1940 and plateaued out for 5
years
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, before taking an upturn and reaching the highest of all time and all categories in 1950. In 1950, the
number
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plummeted substantially, followed by a steady decline for the remaining
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, years, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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