The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph depicts the percentage of
population
of residents living in urban areas from four different Asian countries between the Add an article
the population
year
1970 to 2020 with the future assumption of the Fix the agreement mistake
years
year
2030 and 2040.
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years
Overall
, Malaysia is having highest
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the highest
till
the Change preposition
by
year
2020 and it is also
forecasted to be maximum in future.
To begin
with
Philippines gradually increased Add a comma
,with
growth
of citizens in the Correct article usage
the growth
year
1990 at 50%, while
, it dramatically sunk in the year
2020 at 40%, whereas
in the years 2030 and 2040
it was predicted to reach Add a comma
,2040
at
55% respectively. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, Thailand’s occupants were not consistent and in the year
2020
it was only at 25%, even though after two decades it Add a comma
,2020
forecasted
to be doubled.
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was forecasted
On the other hand
, Malaysia which
overtook Correct pronoun usage
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Philippines
and reach Correct article usage
the Philippines
at
peak in the Correct your spelling
a
year
2020 at 75% of people living in this
city, however
it was projected to surge more Add the comma(s)
,however
at
85% in the years 2030 and 2040 respectively. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, Indonesia also
overtook it’s
population growth of Replace the word
its
other
two cities which are Correct article usage
the other
Philippines
and Thailand in the Correct article usage
the Philippines
year
2020 at 50% and assumed to reach at
60% in the years 2030 and 2040 respectively.Change preposition
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