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Too much outdoor lighting is a problem in many cities nowadays. What are the causes and negative impacts of light pollution in cities?

#cities #impacts #light #pollution
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Despite
people
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 getting to sleep or going home, the
lights
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 are very bright outside at
night
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. There is excessive lighting in our streets and
cities
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.
This
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 may give various problems for
people
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. I will discuss the negative impacts of many lighting. First of all, the largest harmful effects are mostly linked to human
health
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.
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, lighting can cause Insomnia in many
people
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 in modern society.
People
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 who live in the
cities
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 will suffer from Insomnia that cannot sleep because of the bright
lights
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 from the windows even at
night
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. It may will contributes to the deteriorating
health
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 of modern
people
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, and it
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 will make
people
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 who are very busy more tired.
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, I can give a case of my friend’s words. He said he can not fall asleep deeply without a sleep shade or curtain. As
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,
light
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pollution
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 causes many problems in human
health
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.
On the other hand
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, there is
also
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 side effect that
light
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pollution
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 causes in
cities
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. From an environmental perspective, many
lights
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 in
cities
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 require a considerable amount of electrical energy. The electrical energy to keep
light
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 bright is badly wasted in many
cities
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.
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,
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 there are few floating
population
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 in the
cities
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 at
night
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, the
lights
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 continue to shine. In my experience, I passed a road of a city in the middle of the
night
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, but it was like daytime even though there are no
people
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.
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, the waste from
light
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pollution
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 leads to other environmental
pollution
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such
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 as air
pollution
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that is
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 caused by generating electricity. In conclusion,
light
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pollution
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 results in numerous types of problems. It harms
people
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’s
health
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 and
also
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 leads to the destruction of the environment
such
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 as air
pollution
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. We are able to save our energy to save our
health
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.
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