The table and pie chart below provides information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
The table and pie chart below provides information on transport and
car
use in Edmonton.
Overall
, the most usable transport in Edmonton is car
, the most popular reason for people using Add an article
a car
the car
car
in Add an article
the car
a car
city
is Add an article
the city
a city
commute
to work.
The most common transport is Add an article
the commute
a commute
car
, it is Add an article
a car
the car
forty five
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forty-five
percent
. Bus and Taxi have the same percentage, it is 10%. LRT is 35 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.
The ordinary people’s reason for using Change the spelling
per cent
car
is Add an article
a car
the car
commute
to work, it is as much as 55 Fix the infinitive
to commute
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
45% use it for business. People who take their children to school in a car
contribute to
40 Change preposition
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, only 15% travels
by Correct subject-verb agreement
travel
car
for shopping and leisure activities.Submitted by dnm.best on
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