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The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of three different purposes,
agriculture
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, domestic and
Industry
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, of using
water
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 in the world and in four different countries in 2000. In 2000, the world used 70%, 22%, and 8% of
water
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 in
agriculture
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,
Industry
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, and domestic respectively. The pattern resembled that of China in 2000,
whereas
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 India used even more
water
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, India spent 92% of their
water
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 on farms, and only 8% on domestic and
Industry
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 sectors.
In contrast
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,
agriculture
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 and
industry
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 almost equally shared 90% of the
water
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 in New Zealand. Among the four countries, the percentage of
water
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 which was used for the Canadian
Industry
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 was 80%, which was the highest. There were 8% and 12% of the
water
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 in Canada used for
agriculture
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 and domestic respectively. The percentage of Canadian domestic using
water
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 is almost the same as
Industry
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 using
water
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 in New Zealand.
Overall
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, the data show that
water
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 use in China and India is closer to the world's patterns of consumption.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words agriculture, industry, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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