The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare the present and the projection of the future of an industrial park located in Norbiton.
Overall
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, the area will be extended, constructing
also
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in the north
side
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of the
river
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.
Furthermore
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, all the factories will be replaced by houses, turning it into a residential zone with a playground, a school, medical facilities and shops.
To begin
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with, it can be seen that the industrial park will be replaced by housing, creating more roads and another round.
For example
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, on the northwest
side
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of the main roundabout, the factories will be demolished to construct two streets connecting three new blocks of buildings.
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, the road from the north
side
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of the main roundabout will cross the
river
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through a bridge to connect
this
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area with more houses. In
this
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case, the farmland
that is
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on the north
side
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of the
river
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will be reduced in the future, keeping only the east part of it.
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to
this
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, the east roadway will remain but with the difference that the two factories that are currently located on both sides of
this
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road will be replaced by blocks of houses, adding a playground on the north
side
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, between the residences and the
river
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.
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, the factory located
at the end
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of
this
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street will be replaced by a school.
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, in the south of what at present is the industrial area, a smaller roundabout will be connected to the main one, constructing shops on the west
side
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of these both and a medical centre on the east
side
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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