The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
The line graph shows the number of
goods
transported in the UK by four diverse modes of transport (
road
,
water
,
rail
, and
pipeline
) from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the quantities of
goods
in three modes (
road
,
water
, and
pipeline
) had increased during the period,
while
that of
rail
remained in its first
figure
,
although
, it had some fluctuations.
In addition
, the
figure
for the
road
ranked
first,
whereas
that for the
pipeline
stood
last
for transporting the volume of
goods
. The
figure
for the
road
as a system of
goods
transported was the highest among other means. At the beginning of the period, it was 70
million
tonnes
and
then
increased to almost 100
million
tonnes
.
In addition
, the
pipeline
stood
last
, and it increased slightly between 1974 and 1980,
then
it experienced a constant trend until 1992 after it grew up slightly, and
then
it remained stable at about 20
million
tonnes
. The figures for
water
and
rail
were the same in the first four years, after that,
although
the
figure
for
water
increased to almost 55
million
tonnes
, that for
rail
decreased to about 35
million
tonnes
in 1981.
In addition
, the
figure
for
water
went up significantly to above 60
million
tonnes
in the four ending years,
while
that for
rail
remained in the initial
figure
after some fluctuations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, road, water, rail, pipeline, figure, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 7 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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