The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
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The line graph shows the number of
goods
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transported in the UK by four diverse modes of transport (
road
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,
water
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,
rail
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, and
pipeline
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) from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the quantities of
goods
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in three modes (
road
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,
water
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, and
pipeline
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) had increased during the period,
while
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that of
rail
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remained in its first
figure
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,
although
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, it had some fluctuations.
In addition
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, the
figure
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for the
road
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ranked
first,
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whereas
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that for the
pipeline
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stood
last
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for transporting the volume of
goods
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. The
figure
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for the
road
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as a system of
goods
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transported was the highest among other means. At the beginning of the period, it was 70
million
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tonnes
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and
then
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increased to almost 100
million
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tonnes
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.
In addition
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, the
pipeline
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stood
last
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, and it increased slightly between 1974 and 1980,
then
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it experienced a constant trend until 1992 after it grew up slightly, and
then
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it remained stable at about 20
million
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tonnes
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. The figures for
water
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and
rail
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were the same in the first four years, after that,
although
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the
figure
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for
water
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increased to almost 55
million
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tonnes
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, that for
rail
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decreased to about 35
million
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tonnes
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in 1981.
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, the
figure
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for
water
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went up significantly to above 60
million
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tonnes
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in the four ending years,
while
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that for
rail
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remained in the initial
figure
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after some fluctuations.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, in addition, last, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, road, water, rail, pipeline, figure, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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