The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
The line graph shows the number of
goods
transported in the UK by four diverse modes of transport (Use synonyms
road
, Use synonyms
water
, Use synonyms
rail
, and Use synonyms
pipeline
) from 1974 to 2002.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the quantities of Linking Words
goods
in three modes (Use synonyms
road
, Use synonyms
water
, and Use synonyms
pipeline
) had increased during the period, Use synonyms
while
that of Linking Words
rail
remained in its first Use synonyms
figure
, Use synonyms
although
, it had some fluctuations. Linking Words
In addition
, the Linking Words
figure
for the Use synonyms
road
ranked Use synonyms
first,
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whereas
that for the Linking Words
pipeline
stood Use synonyms
last
for transporting the volume of Linking Words
goods
.
The Use synonyms
figure
for the Use synonyms
road
as a system of Use synonyms
goods
transported was the highest among other means. At the beginning of the period, it was 70 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
and Use synonyms
then
increased to almost 100 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
pipeline
stood Use synonyms
last
, and it increased slightly between 1974 and 1980, Linking Words
then
it experienced a constant trend until 1992 after it grew up slightly, and Linking Words
then
it remained stable at about 20 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
.
The figures for Use synonyms
water
and Use synonyms
rail
were the same in the first four years, after that, Use synonyms
although
the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
water
increased to almost 55 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
, that for Use synonyms
rail
decreased to about 35 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
in 1981. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
water
went up significantly to above 60 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
in the four ending years, Use synonyms
while
that for Linking Words
rail
remained in the initial Use synonyms
figure
after some fluctuations.Use synonyms
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