The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
The line graph shows the number of
goods
transported in the UK by four diverse modes of transport (road
, water
, rail
, and pipeline
) from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
, it is clear that
the quantities of goods
in three modes (road
, water
, and pipeline
) had increased during the period, while
that of rail
remained in its first figure
, although
, it had some fluctuations. In addition
, the figure
for the road
ranked first,
whereas
that for the pipeline
stood last
for transporting the volume of goods
.
The figure
for the road
as a system of goods
transported was the highest among other means. At the beginning of the period, it was 70 million
tonnes
and then
increased to almost 100 million
tonnes
. In addition
, the pipeline
stood last
, and it increased slightly between 1974 and 1980, then
it experienced a constant trend until 1992 after it grew up slightly, and then
it remained stable at about 20 million
tonnes
.
The figures for water
and rail
were the same in the first four years, after that, although
the figure
for water
increased to almost 55 million
tonnes
, that for rail
decreased to about 35 million
tonnes
in 1981. In addition
, the figure
for water
went up significantly to above 60 million
tonnes
in the four ending years, while
that for rail
remained in the initial figure
after some fluctuations.Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
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