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some people perfer to live in cities, other like to live in country. discuss your both view and give your opinion

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Some
people
 like to live in the
cities
 rather than in the
countryside
, but a large number of
people
 would like the
countryside
. In my opinion, living in an urban or suburban has its distinctive benefits,
however
, I would agree to live in the
countryside
 than living in crowded
cities
. On the one hand, living in the urban is more convenient and quick. Today, many grocery stores, shops and necessities have been built and decided to serve individuals. Especially in resident areas, shops can be easily seen there.
Secondly
, education in
cities
 is interested and invested by the government. Schools and classes are
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more concentrated in the urban areas than the suburban.
On the other hand
, the
countryside
 has a good environment. Because of less factories and businesses are built there, the air is more fresh and clear than in the urban. So, residents who live in the
countryside
 have better mental health and live a happy life than one live in
cities
.
Moreover
, the
people
 in the
countryside
 are more open and willing to help each other
whereas
 the
people
 in the city spend very busy lives, and have no time to think about others. For the reasons mentioned above, I like the slow pace of
countryside
 life.
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