The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The line graph demonstrates alternatives ,which were committed in the three main domains of different offences within Newsport city centre between 2003-2012 .
Overall
,at the beginning burglary had the highest rate : 3400 incidents ,the number of which dropped sharply by 2008 to 1200 occurrences and had remained virtually unchanged since.On the contrary
, robbery had a low rate ,which didn’t fluctuate significantly : about 750 incidents in 2003 that decreased to 500 in 2008 and then
gradually returned to its previous amount by 2012.Also
,one of the area of crime is car theft , figures of which hold always fairly steady . Observing this
area,it is interesting to note it decreased a little bit from 2800 to around 2000 occasions between 2005 and 2006 and then
, car theft’s indicators rose slowly until it reached in 2012 the same level as in the beginning. Thus
, this
type of crime became the most common.Submitted by acaitaz on
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